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Wishfull and Listless

Wishfull and Listless

Wishfull and listless
my mind wanders
the corridors of time

fantasy and beliefs
they gather to their
melting place

desire and longing
greet me with open arms
and fullfillment empty

profound and progressive
wishfull thoughts and rhetoric
encircle the heart

the illusion that what you
wish for
is actually true

evidence and rationality
that argues
it's existance

self serving
the bias
of emotional memory

reduced the substance
of one's youthfull
fallacy

irrelevant the conclusion
and false the comprimise
proof of assertion

meets its demise
in the lack
of chronological snobbery

and there I am left alone
wandering those corridors
isolated within my mind..

Maree Long
(c) Maree Long 2008


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Wow! It was almost like gong on a trip. If I can believe your poem then I could go anywhere and be anything. Just to let the mind take you through space and land anywhere. It could be the same as real.

By valius324, # 11. November 2008, 16:09:33

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Very nice :up: and good as always :D

By Cois, # 12. November 2008, 00:24:18

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thank you cois

By Maree Long, # 12. November 2008, 08:31:47

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