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The Ship

Bound with my own pain.
Trapped in my own sorrow.
Tortured by my own memories.
banished by my own thoughts

Hope cuts the bands.
Joy is the key to set me free.
Forgetting slows the whip.
Sleep brings the ship.

The Way We Should BeForget Never

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I hope that ship is full off love and peace

By deon4u, # 11. October 2007, 19:26:30

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this poem i think needs to be read twice once clear through and next the first line of the first paragraph then the first line of the second paragaph and so forth. it makes a lot more sense
hope you like.

By pinkwaterbug, # 19. October 2007, 22:06:43

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Keep up the good work! Carry a pencil and pad with you now and forever. And ALWAYS WRITE DOWN YOUR INSPIRATIONS. Good Luck.

By DesertDawg, # 26. October 2007, 00:13:24

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thanxs
im glad u understood it alot of people dont
i won a award for this one

By pinkwaterbug, # 26. October 2007, 17:57:30

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i like this one

By thephntm, # 9. November 2007, 22:30:52

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thanx

By pinkwaterbug, # 11. November 2007, 21:35:04

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