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Caged

Friday, 28. September 2007, 03:45:05

this is a poem I wrote titled "Caged"

In a Cage I Sit and Swing
Taunted Teased,
And Forced to Please.
Tattered Dreams,
Float on by,
Dreams of Freedom,
And the Sky.
Broken Heart And
Shattered Soul.
Memories Come,
And Memories go.
But Pain is Constant,
And Ever Flows.
Never Healing,
With Full Feeling.
So Here I sit,
In a Cage.
Built of Pain,
And my Rage.

Masked

Comments

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It rhymes!!! p: Good poem though...liked the way you used imagery.

By sayeed_salim, # 1. October 2007, 19:19:59

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nice one

By iiiiis Lee, # 3. October 2007, 18:50:58

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Awesome poem! love the way you wrote it, keep them coming!

:-)

By TedLovesYou, # 4. October 2007, 20:56:42

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Wow! This puts my poems to shame! :smile: Really good!

By Torchwood rocks!, # 6. October 2007, 10:15:54

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Good...Like...WOW...:troll:

By Cypek, # 8. October 2007, 18:52:56

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Hello I am Dr.Palas from India. so much pain really? your poems r sort of well hmm err sort of good.

By palasmirror2007, # 14. October 2007, 21:55:14

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this poem is so awesome..you're great!

By xXxDrowningLessonsxXx, # 30. October 2007, 23:47:23

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im glad u think so
this is my favorite

By pinkwaterbug, # 30. October 2007, 23:48:48

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This is, by far, my favourite of all of them.
Really well written. Perhaps I like it so much because it describes me so well.

I haven't written anything in ages...

By Spaggyj, # 31. October 2007, 22:43:19

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I'm liking this poem, too. The first 9 lines have really well worked syllables which definitely give the impression of swinging.

By fritter, # 2. November 2007, 12:42:24

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thanx

By pinkwaterbug, # 2. November 2007, 15:21:38

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beautiful poem and yet so sad...

By wickedlizard, # 2. November 2007, 22:27:41

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thanx

By pinkwaterbug, # 2. November 2007, 23:54:25

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So Here I sit,
In a Cage.
Built of Pain,
And my Rage.



well, thats my life as a kid

By thephntm, # 9. November 2007, 22:36:01

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i'm glad others can relate to it to

By pinkwaterbug, # 23. August 2008, 03:03:07

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