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Cold Day

A cold cold day,
When men with cold hearts,
Hurt innocent people,
with no remorse.

A cold cold day,
with a few warm hearts,
Who helped us all,
And then did fall.

A cold loud sound,
Echoed through the town,
Penetrated our souls,
Then left a hole.

What a cold cold world,
Where the blow was hurled,
A shock wave flowed,
As bad men mocked.

With cold cold joy,
They tried to destroy,
But our nation prevailed
And they did fail.

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Comments

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that's good. i like it much! mucho love!

By ivealwaysbeenevil, # 8. October 2007, 17:03:19

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Cold.glad they failed.hope your day and life is warm

By deon4u, # 11. October 2007, 19:15:55

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A very sad Day.
I'm so sorry!

By marianis, # 15. October 2007, 19:26:25

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It was a sad day indeed....

By sukku, # 17. October 2007, 05:02:13

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It's very sad,I luv it!

By Bé [NhÓc], # 17. October 2007, 15:08:06

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Sad, sad, sad, but beautifull.

Also the shape.

:smile:

By diokenes, # 17. October 2007, 16:10:36

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thanx

By pinkwaterbug, # 17. October 2007, 17:24:00

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Certainly, what is a 11/09 / was and is cruel.
Sincerely, and the pain was excruciating remain.
(The being) who can be shredded to destroy other people and do harm to others - it is human ????????

By mmessaoud63, # 19. October 2007, 22:13:39

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im glad you liked my poem.

By pinkwaterbug, # 19. October 2007, 22:14:28

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that was a very touching poem, an unfortunate thing, but i think you represented the feeling pretty good...

~sapphira~

By sapphira, # 19. October 2007, 22:46:05

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thanx

By pinkwaterbug, # 19. October 2007, 22:47:17

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I feel upset for the humans who die much..
This massacre perhaps, do the state.....
These a game....
You live reconciles with

By akr54, # 6. November 2007, 22:29:02

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i hate terrorists. i am currently crying my eyes out all over my key board. i love your poems. this one is truly about a cold, cold day.

By thephntm, # 9. November 2007, 22:25:36

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this is one i did a year after 9 11

By pinkwaterbug, # 11. November 2007, 21:37:48

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very nice and good poem.

By soyassine, # 8. February 2008, 10:29:03

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thanx

By pinkwaterbug, # 8. February 2008, 21:31:10

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well that was deep i just of to slash my wrist

By Artrock, # 14. February 2008, 23:16:32

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I like this poem.

By LittleNinja, # 27. March 2008, 20:13:58

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i like your screen name little ninja...it makes me smile :D

By ivealwaysbeenevil, # 27. March 2008, 23:18:17

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lol you like ninjas huh today you told me you were a ninja

By pinkwaterbug, # 23. August 2008, 03:00:41

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I AM A NINJA!! :D

By ivealwaysbeenevil, # 25. August 2008, 21:27:40

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no your a dork!!

By pinkwaterbug, # 4. September 2008, 22:49:31

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so...ninja's can be dorky...right?

By ivealwaysbeenevil, # 8. September 2008, 21:09:51

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why you asking me. lol you should know

By pinkwaterbug, # 9. September 2008, 20:54:53

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well...i'm a ninja..and you're a dork...can our forces combine in one great effort?

By ivealwaysbeenevil, # 9. September 2008, 21:31:10

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lol what kind of great effort

By pinkwaterbug, # 13. September 2008, 18:45:24

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lol, the bestest greatest effort...

By ivealwaysbeenevil, # 18. September 2008, 00:04:18

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ok........

By pinkwaterbug, # 1. October 2008, 00:11:50

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pssht...you're not trying hard enough.

By ivealwaysbeenevil, # 1. October 2008, 21:22:01

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lol cause i don't wanna

By pinkwaterbug, # 21. October 2008, 20:31:55

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obviously:rolleyes:

By ivealwaysbeenevil, # 24. October 2008, 00:31:25

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lol ya

By pinkwaterbug, # 29. October 2008, 19:14:08

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