Angel Tears
Wednesday, 5. December 2007, 21:08:07
(this may suck, i wrote it a long time ago, so bear with me and please comment!)
this feeling, these feelings
they let my eyes see
but how can this being
of truancy be?
a single teardrop runs down yon angels face
and by fortune is wiped by the finger of grace
but still lives that sadness buried in her mind
so deep and discreet only god could find
but her prayers go unanswered,
the truth that is lost
it affected the future
a life was the cost
that this sense of lonliness could overcome hope
so everone weeps, and she leaves them to cope
now far away in a small place of peace
her untainted face, a frown to crease
as she ponders life's choices
made wrong or done right
and what went through her head
on the last lonely night
her sadness goes on, death could not destroy
it resides in us all, both girl and boy
the want of an end, the need for relief
like unto a tree with each falling leaf
(ebbing away....)
so on she cries, her tears cleanse our world
her banner of sunshine held highly, unfurled
bringing light to the others in need
now she has finally come to succeed
this feeling, these feelings
they let my eyes see
but how can this being
of truancy be?
a single teardrop runs down yon angels face
and by fortune is wiped by the finger of grace
but still lives that sadness buried in her mind
so deep and discreet only god could find
but her prayers go unanswered,
the truth that is lost
it affected the future
a life was the cost
that this sense of lonliness could overcome hope
so everone weeps, and she leaves them to cope
now far away in a small place of peace
her untainted face, a frown to crease
as she ponders life's choices
made wrong or done right
and what went through her head
on the last lonely night
her sadness goes on, death could not destroy
it resides in us all, both girl and boy
the want of an end, the need for relief
like unto a tree with each falling leaf
(ebbing away....)
so on she cries, her tears cleanse our world
her banner of sunshine held highly, unfurled
bringing light to the others in need
now she has finally come to succeed
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By jm081, # 11. December 2007, 21:20:01
that poem is reall REALLY amazing not joke
most ppl dont rhym when they do their own poem
and its a really good story line thingy. lol
but yeah the dead effing truth is...........
its really good jm
luv u!!!!!!
lol shleppy
By supernd*4*spd, # 11. December 2007, 23:03:18
MORE POETRY TO COME, NOW, 4 SURE
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By supernd*4*spd, # 17. December 2007, 16:41:47
I CAN HAS CHEEZBURGER?
LOL YA THATS ON SOMEONE'S PIC, WITH A CAT...IT WAS GREAT I LOVED IT!
BTW...WHY WASNT YOU AT THE PARTY?
By jm081, # 17. December 2007, 16:44:40
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UM IDK I SERIOUSLY THOUGHT IT WAS LIKE, AVERAGE, NOT ALL THAT GOOD. THEN MY FRIENDS TOLD ME TO PUT IT UP AND OTHERS LIKED IT SO NOW I THINK I REALLY DID THINK IT WAS GOOD ALL ALONG...I WAS JUST AFRAID OTHERS WOULDNT LIKE IT CUZ ALL THE PEOPLE I SHOWED IT TOO BEFORE WERE LIKE "OH YEAH W/E IT WAS OK".
LOL YA SERIOUS SELF CONFIDENCE ISSUES BUT IT DONT MATTER NOW!
By jm081, # 17. December 2007, 20:24:05
By jm081, # 17. December 2007, 20:24:24
mangostreen?
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PERTY? NO CLUE WHATS GOING ON...
By jm081, # 18. December 2007, 16:26:15
"IVEALWAYSBEENEVIL" do you think I'm lying?
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SCHLEPPI!!!!!!!!!!
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lol, jm is gonna come back and be like what the hell?...
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